Revision plan:
I think that for each segment, I could use more statistics and facts. I think I also need to make sure I have clearer topic sentences. I still need to add captions to my pictures and explain their relevence. I do need to change my introduction to focus more on the argument instead of the background to the war. I think all my anchor texts are good except for one which I think isn't very informational and important. I'm also going to work on my conclusion and make it more meaningful.
I also need to add secondary sources. I'm also going to work on my organization on ideas, the font and color choices, and explaining my quotes better before writing them. I need to give more examples who is saying and believing these ideas, not just throwing them out there.
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